Well finally after like what? 5 months I put up chapter three.... After reading all three of them one after another I was trying to decide if they tied together okay.

Alice Kallio (Main person of awesomeness that has an interesting past.)
Jessica Randouf (shes german *winks* lolz)
Marco (insane monster master freak thing that eats people.)

I plan to make this story with a sort of resident evil type of touch,
(not like characters from RE because I don't do fanfics I hate OOCing characters.) but the aspect of a weird type of .. I don't want to say infection... but just an interesting race that has evolved from humans. The reason I say resident evil is because basically people who evolve turn into mindless powerhouse weirdos that like to eat humans lmao.

But yeah... I am hoping that I can update regularly or something.. so people don't get bored of waiting.. and that I don't pull another 5 month thing and freak out later about the thought that they dont transfer over to the next chapter very well.



Oh and thanks to the people who have read Naturally Unnatural and like even though it was 5 months later you read the third part lol
so yeah people decided to end with a question...
Do you think the chapters tie together okay so far? and any suggests on writing style of it? Like something I need to add to it..? (you can answer over a note or even comment on this thing I dont really care lol just want to get some serious critic feedback or something lol)

Thank yousss

p.s I need to hurry up and learn to draw better too.. so I can help with the images you people get when you read, lolz.